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well, july is over and with it goes gift-art month. i didn't get everyone i wanted done so i'll probably have some more thrown in some time. in the meantime you get a bunch of sashas. or at least 2 because that's how many pictures of her i had started.

i'd seen a picture somewhere where all the negative space was a pattern and it had looked interesting so i wanted to try it. sadly, by the end of this little experiment i didn't like how the pattern looked and stuck with flat black, which tends to be dressed properly for any occasion. this is based off a like, 2 inch at the most tall doodle of sasha's face looking irritated. i liked the expression a lot more in the doodle than in the finished version. something about cleaning up images tends to rob them of some of their life. doodles/sketches tend to be more loose and lively. what can ya do. since i was using the pen tool in photoshop to do all of this i got to play up the hair which always makes me happy. the hair and the coloring on the eyes are actually the only parts i REALLY like still. it's not so much that things in the image look WRONG to me, the just don't look the way i'd wanted them to, which is kind of a letdown for any sort of artist i think.

i was going to work on this more to see if i could tweak it until i was happy with it, but i lost interest so this is the final version.

OH! but for people always itching to critique or something, now you can do something helpful. the text, i want it there but the way it is now is just bad. so, if anyone has a suggestion as to how to make it fit a bit better feel free to lemme know. if a way is figured out i'll probably update the picture with it and maybe make a print. we'll see.

wow that was a long desc. sorry.

sasha belongs to me, no taking her or the art. done in photoshop w/ the free-form pen tool. faving w/o commenting is boo and all that jazz.

and m.f. what the hell, work in firefox, da.

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:iconayuichi:
I dunno how to help with the text, but I like the picture. ^^;

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ah, you, ee, chee.
:iconshadowstar:
Wow. Awesome picture! Love the eyes!

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Avatar by :icon0xo:
:icongabbie:
I think something along the edge (like this: [link] --ignore the font of course) or behind/through some of the black on her (like this: [link]) would look nice...that's just my opinion, though. Maybe type it out and move the text around, see where it looks good?

Onto the actual picture: I am in love with the checker-border on the black, and her eyes are absolutely gorgeous. I love the color.

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:spidey:
:iconsashamya:
the checkers were going to be the pattern for all the black minus the facial lines, but it looked toooo busy.

thanks for the suggestion, but i want to keep the text smaller i think. putting it right across the top or bottom makes it kind of like a poster, y'know?

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"Contrary to what most people say, the most dangerous animal in the world is not the lion or the tiger or even the elephant. It's a shark riding on an elephant's back, just trampling and eating everything they see."

~Jack Handy, SNL
:iconbluebumblebee:
i like her eyes. plus i'm biased because mine are green too. as for the text, im not really a guru in that field but (this is just my thought) maybe you could use a grungier font, and make the size of the font a bit bigger, so the letters kind of hang out of the bubbles, and make the part of the letter IN the bubble black and the part outside of the bubble white. or something. that may end up looking stupid though. but that's just my 2 cents.
:icongabbie:
mm, good point...the big text is a bit distracting, as well. I hope you can find something that works for you, anyway!

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:iconsashamya:
maybe, but that's the font i always use for sasha's voice O: the b/w thing might work tho.

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"Contrary to what most people say, the most dangerous animal in the world is not the lion or the tiger or even the elephant. It's a shark riding on an elephant's back, just trampling and eating everything they see."

~Jack Handy, SNL
:icondemonko:
ooo O_O i like her eyes :D and she looks very pretty :D

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NarutoxSakura yes
InoxSai
TemarixShikamaru yes :D
HinataxKiba
TenTenxLee
Sasuke can just be left alone for his bad deeds > .<
Neji can be with nedraxchan XD
I am a Sakura fan boy :)
oh and sorry Choji ^^;
:iconsharkbyte3827:
As far as the text goes I think it could do without the bubbles, you could just make the text white, or if you want ot be fancy keep it black and add a white outline around it or make it all green with a white shadow, nah not htat then the text would have more attention. I hope that helps you out wiht some ideas for the text.

As for the picture it has such an intereting look and feel to it, reminds me of Frank Millers comic book 'Sin City'. My two favorite things about this picture are her face and the strands of her, even the little hair pin holding it back.

THis looks really great, good work.
:iconmrguppies:
Kewliez~ Love how you did it ^_^

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